Hello... ♉(‾.‾)♉ this is not my feelings, but just got an inspiration when I saw a guy who has made 2 of my best friends cried... ː̗̀(`3΄)ː̖́ I dislike this guy, I don't hate him, because we don't know each other..==
I just imagine that those words down there *pointing at my poem down there* are they're feeling.. Maybe? I can't read another people's mind.. I'm not a mind-reader!! I'm normally, JW~
And don't you know that actually today I'm super happy? ƗƗɐƗƗɐƗƗɐƗƗɐƗƗɐƗƗɐ
Personally, I like this poem, because of the main sentence... 'When silence keep quite' is my favorite part of among all the poem..
So this is it!
⌣»̶·̵̭̌✽ When Silence Keep Quite..✽·̵̭̌«̶⌣
When silence keep quite,
My lips feel so thin...
My legs give up in the moment,
When I hear nothing..
When silence keep quite,
Those silence scratch my fears into tears..
That drop on my cheeks with no answer..
Just water lend me it coldness..
When silence keep quite,
My heart is still beating..
My tongue seems tasteless..
Bitterness is nothing..
When silence keep quite,
I realize that I'm alone..
Sitting next to you, but you're not here..
But you're there, your heart is looking over there..
Your husky voice just make me cry..
But because of that sweet voice,
my heart just torn into pieces...
Just like the shards of the curdled glass..
That's why I better back off..
I better forget your back,
Forget your smile..
And just move on without your shoulder...
Find a new path..
So when silence keep quite...
For me, there's a knock...
Laid on earth, new love..?
A new day with a happy day has come for me because you leave me..
So when silence still keep quite,
It means I'm still alive in earth..
It means I'm not dreaming~
Hope you like it ♥
Sincerely, JW~
I just imagine that those words down there *pointing at my poem down there* are they're feeling.. Maybe? I can't read another people's mind.. I'm not a mind-reader!! I'm normally, JW~
And don't you know that actually today I'm super happy? ƗƗɐƗƗɐƗƗɐƗƗɐƗƗɐƗƗɐ
Personally, I like this poem, because of the main sentence... 'When silence keep quite' is my favorite part of among all the poem..
So this is it!
⌣»̶·̵̭̌✽ When Silence Keep Quite..✽·̵̭̌«̶⌣
When silence keep quite,
My lips feel so thin...
My legs give up in the moment,
When I hear nothing..
When silence keep quite,
Those silence scratch my fears into tears..
That drop on my cheeks with no answer..
Just water lend me it coldness..
When silence keep quite,
My heart is still beating..
My tongue seems tasteless..
Bitterness is nothing..
When silence keep quite,
I realize that I'm alone..
Sitting next to you, but you're not here..
But you're there, your heart is looking over there..
Your husky voice just make me cry..
But because of that sweet voice,
my heart just torn into pieces...
Just like the shards of the curdled glass..
That's why I better back off..
I better forget your back,
Forget your smile..
And just move on without your shoulder...
Find a new path..
So when silence keep quite...
For me, there's a knock...
Laid on earth, new love..?
A new day with a happy day has come for me because you leave me..
So when silence still keep quite,
It means I'm still alive in earth..
It means I'm not dreaming~
Hope you like it ♥
Sincerely, JW~
HUAAA KEREN BANGET
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Trima kasih JP T^T saya senang mendengarnya ternyata puisi yang gue buat gara-gara liat salah satu mantannya 'onr of our best friend' ini bagus juga... (-A-)=3
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